OK resume #2, hows it look?

Question

OK thank to some answers I received on my last question in regards to my resume', I have modified my resume' and would like to know if I'm on the right track with it or doomed to having poor resume' skills.

Skills
MS Office, Windows, Internet, Quick Books, 35 WPM, 10 Key

July 2009- May 2010: xxxx Restaurant in xxxx, KS
Grill Cook
Cooked for xxxx's dinner rush. Able to meet deadlines in fast paced environment. Assisted in developing new menu items.

April 2007- Oct. 2007: Hyatt in xxxx, CA.
Cook II
Cooked for the Hyatt's restaurant xxxx.

Feb. 2006- April 2007: xxxx/xxxx in xxxx, CA
Head Line Cook/Trainer
Started my externship at xxxx moving quickly up the hot line to Head Line Cook at xxxx (a new restaurant with-in the same corporation)

Feb. 2004- April 2006: xxxx Bar & Grill in xxxx, CA
Server/Bartender
I served food and beverages to customers, as well as cashed the customer out.

May 2002- Aug. 2003: xxxx Credit Union in xxxx, MO
Loan Officer
As a Loan Officer I would process loans, opened new accounts such
as checking, savings, IRAs, Cd's, and money markets.

April 1999- May 2002: xxxx Retail in xxxx, MO.
Office Manager/Head Cashier
Customer service, writing/calculating invoices, cash handling, daily balancing, data entry, financial
contracts, inventory, new employee training, sales, product trouble shooting

Answer 1

What type of job are you going for? So much advice will depend on this. Order the items to sell you as the best candidate for the position. This is a chronological resume, but if you're wanting to get into a job that more closely represents your loan officer or office manager position, go with a functional resume and lead with those experiences that show how you meet the needs of the new position you want.



Here are some wording suggestions:

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Feb. 2006- April 2007: xxxx/xxxx in xxxx, CA

Head Line Cook/Trainer

Advanced quickly from externship at xxxx up the hot line to Head Line Cook at xxxx, a new restaurant within the same corporation



Feb. 2004- April 2006: xxxx Bar & Grill in xxxx, CA

Server/Bartender

Excelled at meeting customer expectations and accurately processed customer payments



May 2002- Aug. 2003: xxxx Credit Union in xxxx, MO

Loan Officer

Successfully process loans and assisted customers opening new accounts such as checking, savings, IRAs, CD's, and money markets.



April 1999- May 2002: xxxx Retail in xxxx, MO.

Office Manager/Head Cashier

Customer service, developed/calculated invoices, cash handling, daily balancing, data entry, financial contracts, inventory, new employee training, sales, product trouble shooting.

Answer 2

I think it looks great. Its short, concise, and to the point. It also look as though it will fit on one page, which is good because most HR people will not even look at the second page of a resume, and usually throw those ones out.

Answer 3

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