Question:
Help with resume and cover letter?
anonymous
2009-05-09 06:19:56 UTC
can anyone please help me revise my resume to look and sound more professional. Is there something else that i should add or remove? also, i need to make a cover letter for a new job I'm applying for. My main goal is to become a manager of a well known hotel and/or casino, then eventually own my own hotel/casino.

Jason M Wolf

xxxx xxxker Rd,
Sharon Hill, PA 19079
Phone:xxx-xxx-xxxx
JWolf0825@yahoo.com

Hotel and Casino Management:

I am a sincere, loyal and dedicated individual who has a great deal of ambition. Although I have little experience in the hospitality industry, I love to learn, and am always up for a challenge. I get along well with others, while also working efficiently on my own. I am seeking a position where I can develop and excel while giving my best to an employer.

Employment History:

• United Parcel Service
Oct 2007 - Present
March 2006 – July 2007
Package Handler
Philadelphia, PA 19153
•load and unload air containers
•load and unload trailers
•handle hazardous packages
•light supervision

• Philadelphia Zoo
Mar 2007 - Aug 2007
Membership Sales
Philadelphia, PA 19104
•Provide Customer Service
•Advise guests
•Conduct sales presentations
•Demonstrate goods or services
•Identify best product for customer's needs
•Use sales techniques

• BJ's Wholesale Club
May 2007 - Mar 2007
Cashier and Sales
Springfield, PA 19064
•Provide Customer Service
•Receive and disburse money
•Operate a cash register
•Answer customers' questions
•Compute and record totals of transactions
•Greet customers
•Maintain clean and orderly checkout area
•Process merchandise returns and exchanges
•Resolve customer complaints
•Balance cash register
•Sell products or services
•Price merchandise
•Provide Customer Service
•Receive and disburse money
•Operate a cash register
•Answer customer questions
•Compute and record totals of transactions
•Greet customers
•Resolve customer complaints
•Balance cash register
•Sell products or services
•Price merchandise

EDUCATION:
• High School Diploma
Apr 2009 - May 2009
Continental Academy
Miramar, FL 33025
•GPA: 3.78
•High School Diploma in Core Studies

SKILLS:
• sales
• retail
• warehousing
• shipping
• supervision
• customer service
REFERENCES:
Available on request.
Four answers:
Viv'
2009-05-12 10:53:20 UTC
Hotel and Casino Management:



Sincere, loyal and dedicated individual willing to learn and able to work well with both a team and alone seeks an opportunity to bring energy and dedication to your company.



Employment History:



• United Parcel Service

Oct 2007 - Present

March 2006 – July 2007

Package Handler

Philadelphia, PA 19153

•load and unload air containers (how many per day?)

•load and unload trailers (how many and what was in them?)

•handle hazardous packages (trained? certifications?)

•light supervision (of how many staff? Acting Director, Manager?)



• Philadelphia Zoo

Mar 2007 - Aug 2007

Membership Sales

Philadelphia, PA 19104

•Provide Customer Service (what kind of CS - Excellent?)

•Advise guests (of what?)

•Conduct sales presentations (for how many guests? Where? how many a day?)

•Demonstrate goods or services (what goods? how?)

•Identify best product for customer's needs

•Use sales techniques

(what were the results?)



• BJ's Wholesale Club

May 2007 - Mar 2007

Cashier and Sales

Springfield, PA 19064

•Provide Customer Service

•Receive and disburse money

•Operate a cash register

•Answer customers' questions

•Compute and record totals of transactions

•Greet customers

•Maintain clean and orderly checkout area

•Process merchandise returns and exchanges

•Resolve customer complaints

•Balance cash register

•Sell products or services

•Price merchandise

•Provide Customer Service

•Receive and disburse money

•Operate a cash register

•Answer customer questions

•Compute and record totals of transactions

•Greet customers

•Resolve customer complaints

•Balance cash register

•Sell products or services

•Price merchandise



EDUCATION:

• High School Diploma

Apr 2009 - May 2009

Continental Academy

Miramar, FL 33025

•GPA: 3.78

•High School Diploma in Core Studies



SKILLS: Strong sales and retail abilities. Proficient with warehousing & shipping skills. Experience in working with team as both co-worker and as supervisor. Excellent customer service skills. (computers? Word, excell, power point, fax, copiers??? e-mail???)



REFERENCES:

Available upon request.



Best of luck to you!
?
2014-12-05 06:02:58 UTC
Why don't you ask someone to write a resume for you .I know sometimes it gets very difficult and time consuming to write a resume. If you want to write it yourself the you have to search internet for better layouts to create a resume. You can hire an online resume writing service too.
anonymous
2009-05-09 19:56:53 UTC
The bullet points are a good idea, as it helps increase readability. I do think it is a bit long though and you might try to condense it a bit.
anonymous
2009-05-09 06:28:27 UTC
your res is way too long and boring.....

your letter is horrible,,,,,,,

they only free tip you will get from me is..........

never,ever start a sentence with'''I'''......you have done that

3-4 times in one short letter....

if your res/letter landed on my desk I would look at it and laugh...


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