Resume Help Please!!!!!?

Question

I have included my address name and everything on top of the resume.Is there anything i need to fix,put?Is the format alright?
Thanksss

Education:
New Westminster Secondary School 2008
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Experience:
New Westminster Kumon South
-Marked students work, Data entry, and helped students with their work.

Aurora Bistro
- Helped Clean dishes and sweeping floors.
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Skills and Ability
-English Fluent
-Chinese Fluent
-Able to lift heavy objects.
-Good Typing Skills.
-Good presentation skills.
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Awards/Achievements:
-John Robson Community School Diligence Award 2004
- Grade 7 Hockey Captain
-New Westminster Sportsmanship award 2006
-New Westminster/Killarney Basketball MVP 2007
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Education:
New Westminster Secondary School 2008
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Reference Upon Requested.

Answer 1

It's definitely original!



Also, change Reference Upon Requested to Reference Upon Request.

Answer 2

I would place education near the bottom, if it isn't called for. You also have education placed twice on this resume.



I would start with your name, phone number and email address at the very top. Then an objective. This would include a brief outline of what you are looking for in a career, have this tailor made for the position your applying for.



Then your employment information, unless clean dishes and sweeping floors is the only thing you have. Elaborate a bit more about your New Westminster Kumon South position. Remember, tailor it to the position you are applying for.



Then your awards/achievements.



Then you Skills/Abilities



And leave the References Upon Requested off of it. Every employer assumes that they will receive references when requested. Instead, see if you can have your past employer and some of your professors provide you with reference letters. Anyone else that you know holding a good position with a company, and has been there awhile also provide you with one. You'll take all those letters and type of a sheet with there contact names and numbers, and provide the employer with a copy. You need for them to speak with all your references because you lack employment history.



Otherwise it looks good.

Answer 3

Here are my suggestions:



Remove one of those two mentions of "Education". If you graduated, mention this "Graduated with diploma", "Graduated in top five of my class" or something like that.



Place an apostrophe in "student's work", insert the word "completed" before data entry, don't capitalize "data", pull that last comma before "and helped ..." and replace the mentioning of "and helped students ..." with the word "tutored".



With the Aurora Bistro work, can you dress this up a little more? Did you do any customer service work? Answer the telephone and take reservations? Serve as host/hostess? You could try something like, "Operated dishwashing equipment in busy bistro, ensured dishes were clean and sanitized for public use. Kept dishwashing area clean and organized. Also helped with general janitorial duties when required."



Also with the bistro work, state how long you worked there for. Were you promoted? Hired part-time and then offered full-time hours? Can you show your employer valued you?



Change "Skills and Ability" to "Skills and Abilities".



Replace "English Fluent" and "Chinese Fluent" with one sentence reading "Fluent in English and Chinese".



Replace "Reference Upon Requested" with "References Upon Request".



Try bolding your section headings so they stand out more.



Have you done any volunteer work? If so, list this as well.

Answer 4

Here is a little help i'm giving you a complete sample of a resume i hope this help you good luck



Karhonza bailey



1403 South 9th St. · Monroe, LA 71202 · Phone: [phone]





Objective Seeking a customer service position in which a professional can infuse fresh concepts.

Qualifications customer service, customer satisfaction and client retention.Competent individual who is able to work with minimal supervision while operating successfully in a stressful, fast-paced environment and proficiently handling several priorities at once.



Enjoys challenge and is consistently interested in learning.



Education

Wossman High School Monroe LA

High School Grad 2006



Grambling State University Grambling, LA

Undergrad 2007





University of Phoenix Online Phoenix Arizona

Undergrad 2007



Employment Experience



Burlington Coat Factory

Sales Associate/Cashier Sep. 2007- Jun, 2008

Transfer Merchadise from store to store when requested.

Working the NJO system to see if we have/do not have merchadise

Assisting Customers with cash check and credit transactions.

JP Morgan Chase/Man Power Xerox



JCPenny's

Customer Service Associate Apr2007-Sep,2007

Customer Service Associate April, 2007- Sep, 2007

Assist Customers with cash transactions

Opening new credit cards account

Giving the best customer service I could give







File Prep and Assembler Jan. 2007 - Feb. 2007

· handling customer files.

· Establishes professional, trusting relationships with crucial accounts keyed to client satisfaction resulting in customer retention.



Produces quality results within a fast-paced environment.





Target Washington,DC

Customer Service Desk Associate/ Sales Associat Sep. 2006 – Dec. 2006



· Reliably handled all merchandise returns and exchanges while working efficiently in a fast-paced environment.

· Resolved customers’ complaints and retained the store’s policies and customer satisfaction.

· Demonstrated effective presentation skills for merchandise with personalized service for customers both on the sales floor and by phone.

· Assisted with store inventory controls, including stocking and pricing merchandise.

· Responsible for working with computer, handling cash, check and credit transactions.







Computer Skills Proficient in Word programs with an understanding of Excel and Powerpoint; skilled with Internet browsers and e-mail. Experienced with printers, scanners and fax machines.



Awards Graduated in the top 5% of my class received rewards for perfect attendance and leader of organizations such as and Student Council.

Affiliations Member – the Beta, Honors Choir, and Student Council.



Volunteer Work Volunteered to walk in the American Heart Association, Did Volunteer work at the Avalon Place, also did volunteer work at Glenwood Regional Medical Clinic.



References are available upon request.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

First off, you have your education listed twice. Move it to the bottom of your resume. Next, list your job titles and dates of employment. An objective may also help, but make it interesting. HR people see a lot of resumes, you want yours to be memorable. There are lots of websites that offer resume templates, do a web search.



Good luck!