i want to know what you think of my resume' I am 18... ?

Question

Aram K. Mikha
111 Almeria Dr. San Jose, CA 95000
E-mail: [e-mail]
Cell: [phone]

O B J E C T I V E

To obtain a challenging position and further develop interpersonal skills in a professional environment.

Q U A L I F I C A T I O N S

-60 WPM -MS Windows XP -MS Windows Vista
-MS Excel -MS PowerPoint -MS Word
-MS Office -MS Outlook -MS Publisher
-Internet Capable -Netscape -Great communication skills
-Good technical writing -Ten Key Calculator -Business Math Using Calculators
- Team Player -Data Entry

P R I O R E X P E R I E N C E

Staples October 2007- Current
Team Lead

California Auto Mart January 2007-August 2007
Web Advertiser and Sales

PrimeStar Financial Services June 2005-January 2007
Financial Presenter


A C C R E D I T A T I O N ’ S

American Red Cross, San Jose, CA

Standard First Aid


E D U C A T I O N

B.A. in Business Management 2008-2012
San Jose City College, San Jose, CA

Operating Finance 2005
San Jose City College, San Jose, CA

Introduction To Business 2006
Evergreen Valley College, San Jose, CA

High School Diploma 2004-2008
Metro Ed, San Jose, CA


V O L U N T E E R E X P E R I E N C E

-AmeriChina B2B -Sacred Heart

Answer 1

Your resume looks impressive, you should get hired in no time!

Answer 2

Well for starters you can change the title Objective to the word Summary. Employers don't care for the word Objective. Second, you have employment listed but you don't have what it is that you've done in that employment. It would be a good idea to be a bit more detailed with your career experience. Third, you are a high school graduate or are you someone who has already gone to college perhaps I misunderstood.



Resumes do not have high schools listed on them. It would be a good idea to remove the name of the high school. Only because it is taking up space and that space can be used by something else. Something else that you want to post on your resume is if you are currently attending college make it known. Example:



College Name

Currently Attending



Another important issue to include on your resume is location. For example, where are these colleges, places of employment?



Using the above example you would have something like this:



College Name San Diego, California

B.S. Computer Science 2004-2008



or something like this



College Name San Diego, California

Bachelors of Science Computer Science

Graduated 2006



There are a few ways you can do this.



I'll tell you one thing, this is only the beginning. You will change, edit, and modify your resume throughout your lifetime more than you know. I have done it more times than I care to count. I finally settled with the most latest one after completing my MBA.



Something else I'll suggest to you is, the first draft is not perfect so don't get upset over it. The best way to handle it is don't panic. Second, choose an area that you will focus as a career path. When writing your Summary, you can use that particular career path as a focus. It will help guide you in finding a position.



Another thing to consider, there are areas to research on the Internet as well. Lastly, since you had attended college, you should have a career adviser that will help you further with this issue as well.

Answer 3

have to describe what you did at those jobs and your experience. I used this resume writing service in my area, this is the email address, ([e-mail]) you should try them, it only cost me $35.00 and I got a great job from this new resume, I never thought about the format that they use but the turn around time was less then 24 hrs. I would have to say it was the best service I have ever used and it was worth every dime. Also they let me pay through paypal.

Answer 4

"Accreditations" shouldn't have an apostrophe. Also, I'm not seeing any spaces between "volunteer" and "experience" as well as "prior" and "experience". Correct those typos so you look polished.



Also, be very careful about putting up personal information online. Not to be paranoid or anything, but it's not a good habit to get into.

Answer 5

Yeah, those typos should be corrected, but apart from that the resume is well written. Never having met you before and going off of what's on your resume, you sound like an intelligent, well-rounded 18 year old.

Answer 6

You can include your hobiess , Achivement and Referral Persons Contact numbers .. then your CV will look more professional..

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